Oops!

Readers, supporters, and follower(s),

While doing some research this morning, I discovered a major flaw in my timeline. There wasn’t any interaction between Daniel and AJ until a few months into the new year. I don’t want to go back and try to fix it. It doesn’t really have a big effect on the story, but to fix things, that part of the story will take a backseat, until it catches up. I remembered a link between Rent Boy and AJ, but I forgot there was a big space in time, where I forgot about the Rent Boy story. My bad.

The problem is I’ve been writing this story from my head, piece by piece, when I should be following a written outline. You can give me an F.

Sorry for my mistake.

5 responses to “Oops!

  1. I’ve been amazed at all the detail you have been writing about. I think you said Daniel had started keeping a journal and I just assumed all the detail was coming from that. I am still interested in learning Daniel’s perspective on AJ and all that happened but of course the major interest at this point is his dealings with Kayla and Mark and his hockey activities.

    I will certainly keep reading as long as you keep writing and I hope that continues for a LONG time. Fabulous is a proper ‘F’ for you and fantastic as well. – Aof

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  2. F?!?!? Man, let me tell you…there's more to this story than the timeline. A slip of detail now and then won't affect the wonderful writing, the captivating story, the guy behind it all.

    Keep on rolling!

    Peace <3
    Jay

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  3. Hello David
    It's a story, at the end of the day, albeit a heavily autobiographical one. I remember when I first came across you in Blogland, which was, indeed, a few weeks into the New Year of 2010, but I had no idea when you first encountered 'AJ'. It really doesn't matter at all in the context of this story, so far as I'm concerned, and I'm sure that goes for most, if not all, of your readers.

    Love & best wishes
    Sammy B

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